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© 2005 Amy Zhang

Amy Z

p.5  10/30/05

The Merlin Conspiracy    25pts.

By Dianna Wynne Jones

 

Note: The Merlin Conspiracy is written from two different first-person points of view: Roddy’s (Arinrhod Hyde), and Nick’s (Nichothodes).

 

1. Roddy: Sybil enchanted the waters.  She invited the King and the Court to the Inner Garden and invited them to drink from the enchanted fountain.  Now, she has control over all of them.  No one ever suspected a thing.  Roddy and Grundo didn’t drink though.  Grundo (Ambrose Temple) knew that his mother had “doctored the water.”  They find that the new Merlin, Sir James Spencer, and Sybil are conspiring together to overthrow all magic on Bless.  Roddy is in a panic.  She can’t turn to her parents, they dunk the water too; she can’t turn to the King, he was the first to drink the waters.  She can’t turn to Granddad Hyde, the Magid, because she does not know his speaker code.  Before she can do anything, she and Grundo are sent to her Grandfather Gwyn (mother’s side).

 

Nick: The meeting is boring.  Nick’s dad, who is really an adopted dad, makes him go.  Ted Mallory is a horror-story writer.  He is looking forward to meeting Maxwell Hyde, a detective storywriter. Nick is constantly trying to get around the mass of people.  While his father is shaking hands, someone intentionally bumps Nick into another world.  There is a group of mages waiting for a late novice from the Academy.  They, mistaking him for the novice, hustle him into the bus and set off somewhere.  Nick does not believe this is really happening.  It is all a dream to him, just another dream of his ideal job, a Magid.

 

2. Roddy: Roddy becomes a powerful magic user.  While at the ruins of some lost city, she goes into the past and is given a bundle of knowledge from an upset woman.  This knowledge of plants is very useful when added to what she already knows.  The Lady of Governance, Merlin’s counterpart, picks her as her heir during the denouement.  She is, as Nick described, ”eaten up inside with magic.”

 

Nick: Nick, also, is and will become a powerful magic user.  He is more thoughtful and understands how a chain reaction can occur from seemingly unimportant things.  He feels somewhat guilty for indirectly causing the events of the entire book.  He learns he can have a Magid’s power and still be a free operator like Romamov; this is his desired occupation.  He also met his “ideal girl,” Roddy.

 

3. Roddy & Nick: They must raise the land.  It will rework all magic, but it must be done.  The False Merlin and the Conspirators must not be allowed to do it first.  They are stuck in a car driving to Stonehenge.  Yet that proves useful.  Grundo explodes the box of salamanders causing the first problem in their plan.  Roddy must do the actual raising.  All of magic is chaos in her vortex.  Then Nick summons the legendary White dragon to help. This frightens the entire crowd, many of which start praying.  Sybil again summons Grandfather Gwyn, Gwyn ap Nud, a form of death, who isn’t a person but a Power.  This time, being the fourth, he has power over her. When all this magic meets, it undoes itself, all contributing to the raising of the land.

 

4. Roddy: Romanov explained how to raise the land; she must do it. She can’t hope for Grundo’s help now that she knows about the glamour charm.  Then she softens slightly when she sees Grundo working hard on a spell to help.  She can’t get help from Nick; she might be the only one who can save him.  Romanov isn’t here now; he’s freeing all the magic users that might help them.  She must take everything and feed it into the vortex to destroy it.  What Roddy doesn’t know of is all the help she is getting while she is concentrating too hard to notice.

 

Nick: “I was scared spitless.”  While driving to Stonehenge, Nick summoned the White Dragon.  “People are going to get hurt,” it said.  That was true for every time it was summoned.  Sometimes things must be done though.  Nick had little choice over the rest of the climax.  He was being tortured by the screams of dying salamanders.

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